The Coming

Apparently I am in my happy place as the juices are flowing for writing creatively.  At Trifecta this weekend, the photo prompt had my mind immediately creating the following piece.  I hope you find it intriguing.

The rules for Trifecta weekend contests are a max of 33 words related to the photo.  So here we go…

Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND

The Coming

The moment the mist encircled the people, everyone froze.

Paulo knew it was his time; he was the chosen one.

He skipped through the immobile people and
contemplated the power he now held.

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13 responses to “The Coming

  1. I love this! So mysterious and so creative.

  2. that carefree little guy in front catches the eye, doesn’t he? well done

  3. Draug419

    hahaha I don’t know why, but the image of him skipping around frozen people is hilarious 😀

  4. Oh gosh, should we be concerned to have our fate in the hands of a child? 😉

    That little fella has featured in many Trifecta responses in so many different ways; I’m loving your interpretation. Nicely done!

  5. The urge to play a joke or two would be very strong, if I were in Paulo’s shoes… Loved this!

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